英语四级六级培训课程

英语四级作文点评:豫园

时间:2022-1-22 作者:哒哒在线少儿英语

【参考范本】

Yu Garden

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.

Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.

I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.

【点评】

本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式,改为情境式话题作文,可能让筹备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活,需要介绍自己家乡的某景点,写起来相对容易。此类文章在结构上的需要不像议论文那样严格,所以可以在语言文字上博出彩,增加词语的丰富性、句子的流畅性都是很好的加分点。

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